3 thoughts on “Forlorn Pauses

  1. I enjoy reading your work. Forlorn Pauses has a real sense of loss. I just whis it were much longer (5 times longer). What you have and the way its written; there is so much more you have to say. Of course the shortness of the poem makes a statement, but it is haunting and I crave more.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it. Yes, I agree, it probably should be longer. Maybe I’ll let it marinate for awhile and continue on. Thanks again for your feedback. Much appreciated!

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